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All the people have differnt in the communication with others because they have dissimilitude in thinking part ticlarly between gender they have big disporting for every think such as: the women direction their thinking about empathy, weeping as express about Weltschmerz
And woman turns her conversation around the point.
But the men direction their express about logic,they go out if they angry,and male goes stright to the point.

We all know admit all the woman express about sentiment because structure her mind used part the left mind and it's contains imagination,empathy,debate. She always speaks about her feeling,and needs interest from other party.
But male speaks about logic because his mind used part the right mind.
So,he usually speaks about what he see valid in future.


Women when some person injured her feeling , or. If he does not understand her, she express weeping.
.but man if he angry for the woman, he go out for his house
because its return nature the physiological, and womens body excreted hormone called (broolakin) and its excreted answer for do for tension,grieft, and feelings of depression its related for crying when rise its rate in body and its cause crying for rivial reason, but the man when he angry go out

Women direct about speach,and she speak faster and make relationshipe with any person than a man. When she talks,she turns her conversation around the point and focus an man understanding,but the man goes straight the point,he is not turn the subject. He directive and dilative in his speech

My opinion: does not find person in earths face similar in personality, and deal,we different for every thing. The gender have different in communication because they have different stracture in their mind.